tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7528902465871296322.post3163490936867746438..comments2023-10-15T03:32:21.426-07:00Comments on SHING YOONG: Food Pornshing Lin yoonghttp://www.blogger.com/profile/12948790964678465656noreply@blogger.comBlogger3125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7528902465871296322.post-25856896068816686452010-09-22T19:58:46.665-07:002010-09-22T19:58:46.665-07:00You are a very good writer and I enjoy reading you...You are a very good writer and I enjoy reading your poems as well. I write poems too but they are very amateur ^^. Please join my blog, I also love foreign films and poetry. I would love some feedback too :)!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7528902465871296322.post-23015303915936786292010-09-17T00:55:53.638-07:002010-09-17T00:55:53.638-07:00Thank you for the contructive criticism Tim, I wil...Thank you for the contructive criticism Tim, I will experiment with what you have said!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7528902465871296322.post-59611651200305300662010-09-15T15:24:45.142-07:002010-09-15T15:24:45.142-07:00Hot stuff! I would just say it's best to cut a...Hot stuff! I would just say it's best to cut as many adjectives and adverbs as possible, when writing prose as opposed to poetry. Just using nouns and verbs gives the writing immediacy and power.Unknownhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07858932535085483286noreply@blogger.com